reflective paragraph
Overall the pitch delivered was successful in more confidence and less nerves than the original practice pitch so the delivery was far smoother and consistent. the feedback that was given from Jeremiah was able to be responded to and questions that he had around characters and the narrative of the plot I was able to respond and answer them fully with the knowledge of delivering the narrative and what would be effective for the tv show. with adaptations made to the powerpoint I was able to deliver the presentation without having to constantly refer to the screen and take focus off the delivery of the pitch.
adaptations that would be made to the pitch
when delivering the pitch I will ensure that I deliver it more confidently and work knowing what Is on each slide to ensure that when I deliver the slide I am not losing focus or the track of where am in the delivery of it and it can done more smoothy and the delivery can be clear and confident to avoid any confusion on thees or carters that nay be raised as questions after the delivery of the pitch
feedback questions
are all the relationships in the show going to be based on kitty's and her relationships with the characters?
each episode will have a slightly different perspective with one ep[psiode exploring kitty's relationships and family dynamics and then the following episode will explore Alfies family dynamics and his relaionahips along with the main relationship from his perspective. then the episodes will contain alternate perspectives and 3rd person perspectives. with Sasha and Emmas frisnhip running as a background narrative.
where does the captive part come in ?
the show will contain many flashbacks and reflect on the issues they had when they were previously together and mistakes they made the first time around. it will look at the toxicity with not just each other but the people around them aswell family and friendships, and how as they grow and change as people they can learn from their past 'captive behaviours'
could captive be brought In for Sasha and Emma a-swell so there aren't too many flashbacks?
the themes of captive and toxic can be explored for these two characters currently and can use kitty as an advisory for them as she will have learned from past mistakes and themes of her previous relationships so she can aid the two girls in their relationship and improving their relationships now and allowing them to seek help in ways that kitty and Alfie never did showing an audience ways to resolve it rather than avoid it along with normalising the fact that some relationships are better apart.
would sex education also be an inspiration for your show following Otis and mauves theme?
following the ideas they had in this show I will do a similar take on it where there are other relationships and themes following in the background but the main relationship is what grips the audience. and use the characters as inspiration for the personalities of the charters in my show.
how would you bring in that comedic aspect could you bring in a comedic character?
the charter of Emma will be the comedic relief character with aspects of humour and comedic stupidity for the audience. her comedy will be inspired by Eric the character in sex education who was again able to bring comedy into a show that also explored challenging and sensitive themes. but his character also has a storyline himself with challenging topics and storylines that are going to inspire what my characters go through.
how will the budget afford such an expensive artist?
to use the songs the budget will include paying for the rights too cover the song as an alternate to paying for the actual artists song and their singing. due too the music being so expensive up and coming artists will be so helpful in maintaining a lower budget and being able to have music that is a part of the show and matches the narrative and the themes in the show.
potential other questions
how do you display diversity in your show?
To display diversity there are a range of characters in the show some being part of the lgbtq community as part of the bbc3 ethos and themes that are often in their shows and dramas.
what other media texts inspired your production?
tv dramas like euphoria and sex education are key dramas that were my inspiration due to the issues they raised and the narratives they represented.
what's the aim of the tv show?
the aim of my tv show is to raise awareness and also encourage speaking up on the issues and help show an audience where they can seek help for the issues they have.
is there potential for multiple seasons?
the season will end on a cliffhanger of the couple in an argument meaning that there will be another season that can carry on from it and continue to show the relationship and its dynamics through further seasons.
are you worried that people won't like the protagonist ?
the main protagonist will make mistakes and seem to go through tough issues and do things that would make them not want to favour the character but I feel as though the audience would take pity on the character and choose to like them.
